Week 8 Comments and Feedback

(A Statue of Ravana, King of Lanka, at Koneswaram Hindu Temple, Sri Lanka, on Wikipedia) 

    Overall I think the feedback I have been receiving from people is pretty helpful. It has mostly been positive, I didn't really see any critiques when I looked through them. I learned some descriptors that people have liked, and that helped me to write smoother sentences that flow better. I liked reading through them too, it was pretty entertaining and made me feel better about my writing, even when I would try new things. 

    I have been trying to leave pretty good comments. In the last posts, I tried using the wow, I wonder, and what-if model. I thought that would probably help my classmates the most. I am definitely influenced by other student's writings. I was inspired to write the Phineas and Ferb story after readings someone's story that was in the Super Mario Bros universe. I would have never thought to write into another story's universe. 

    I did connect a little bit while reading people's writings. Some people wrote so well that I felt like I was hearing them say it to me. I always enjoyed reading other people's blogs. I think it will be good to practice giving better criticisms to other people. I never can think of good criticisms to give to people. I'm looking forward to reading and giving more comments.